What do you think of this political poem?

First of all the last time I answered a question it was severely edited, like 90%. There was absoulutely no profanity etc. so I don't know why. I think the poem has merit, but it just slides over the heads of most people. What surprises me more is the apathy of so many people who ask and answer in this forum. This is a critical time for the U. S. to turn a corner and nobody seems to give a darn. I was always taught if you don't have anything nice to say then say nothing. Sometimes on this forum we could expand it to if you don't have anything intelligent to say keep your mouth shut.